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Twinkle
24th March 2009, 10:58 AM
When you woke up this morning what did you think?
'Should I get up and go and make a drink?
Or did you want to stay snug in bed
with your lovely big snuggly ted?

Well when I woke up I heard the birds,
sweetly singing without any words.
They chirped away,and several cheeped,
so out of bed little Twinkle peeped.

So up I got to start my new day,
I so hope its a good one, I pray.
So I brushed my hair,washed my face,
so I could come and join SocialSpace.

Good Morning to everyone and I hope your day will be
the happiest one ever,let's wait and see!..xxxx

Jo23672
24th March 2009, 01:36 PM
Awwww! That's lovely!

Twinkle
24th March 2009, 02:49 PM
Thankyou Jo!..
None of my poems or ditties would be any good for a book,but they just pop into my head, so here they all be!...

Parsleymyster
26th March 2009, 08:58 PM
Well done Twinkle thats really not bad
Its ever so cheerful and not a bit sad
But when your hugging you big soft ted
What sort of things are alive in your head
When you throw back the covers
And you leap to the floor
Do you sing or whistle as you walk to the door
Is it really so lovely to sing and be merry
Are you really a cute as your little pink fairy
Does the sun always shine on a fairy so sweet
have you swore in the dark when youve trampled your feet
I dont really know why ive written this thread
Its only ten thirty i should be asleep in me bad

Parsleymyster
26th March 2009, 09:03 PM
Twinkle
Dont do your self down ,you write some lovely poems to say they are no good for a book isnt true you are letting words free from your Heart and they will dance with the meaning they were issued so many poems are so polished to make them perfect but then they have lost there Soul so you carry on writing as you do,
Roy xx

Twinkle
26th March 2009, 10:51 PM
Aw!..Thankyou Roy!..Yes they all come out and many can and do ease my pain,but I love to be and think cheery too!...
Your Poem is lovely and just flowed like mine!...

I wrote one a while ago about the person who I so wanted to face,the one who did all the damage in the car,and do you know something?..After I had written it,I sort of felt a weight lift from me as I felt I was talking to him,so poems yes do help!..

Parsleymyster
26th March 2009, 11:30 PM
I read that one it was very good ive heard many artists write music stories poems or plays to vent anger and pain in a very vocal fashion so dont stop put your words to paper well done
Roy xx